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Gonz Paoli

@gonzpaoli

Writer.
Artist.
Comic & Manga Creator.

Story Nerd ๐Ÿค“

Making: Scifi thriller Salvador

Read the gripping first chapter of Salvador, OUT NOW on Substack! ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ

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Remember when NFTs were basically speculation vehicles? I do. That, and, like, club membership cards (many still are). But over the past year-ish-and-a-half it seems that they've been evolving. DRiP ๐Ÿ’ง, @dReaderApp (RIP) and others have been calling them

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New look underway. Also making massive progress on global story outline (just WAIT till you read the end ๐Ÿ˜) Let's GO.

New look underway.

Also making massive progress on global story outline (just WAIT till you read the end ๐Ÿ˜)

Let's GO.
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Been following Danny โญ•๏ธne's animation progress for a while now. Dude just keeps getting better. Like, better-better. I donโ€™t say this lightly: Heโ€™s on the rise. And he deserves the boost. Go show some love. "Sign in with Google" takes less than 10 seconds. Vote here ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ

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I recently learned this outlining a pivotal part of Salvador. It's not action (in my case, thriller) OR love. Love makes it MATTER... SO MUCH MORE.

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Exactly. It's not about BANNING "said". It's about mixing it up with other, meaningful tags too. You can't be growling, whispering, taunting, etc all the time. BUT, when they're appropriate... When they reveal more of your character/story and enrich them... Oof ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿผโ€๐Ÿณ๐ŸคŒ๐Ÿผ

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An idea becomes a character. A character becomes an outline. An outline becomes a full-blown story. A full-blown story becomes a living, breathing thing. A thing that gnaws at you. Eats at you. Doesn't let you go. Even when

An idea becomes a character.

A character becomes an outline.

An outline becomes a full-blown story.

A full-blown story becomes a living, breathing thing.

A thing that gnaws at you. Eats at you. Doesn't let you go.
                                                   
Even when
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*Begin cryptic update* Walt Disney made Steamboat Willie (and a bunch of other shorts you've never heard of) before he ever made Snow White. He also shoveled snow and delivered newspapers before he built Disneyland. Let's go. ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ *End cryptic update*

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So anyway. I think I just fixed the entire third act with one minor detail. The (small) change made a vital character 100x more human (and believable), and a sidekick 10x more important. But more on that later. ๐Ÿ‘€ What did you do this weekend?

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Alpha X-3 took the paper young Clara handed it, the child's innocent scribbles conflicting with its perfect programming. In crooked letters she had written โ€œI love youโ€, overriding X-3โ€™s protocols: yes, it would protect and care for the girl. Word count: 39 I had fun writing

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Kyle gripped his data chip as he watched the two massive robots battle it out. He couldnโ€™t even tell them apart anymore. It was just the blue one versus the red one... And the red one was out for blood. It grabbed the blue oneโ€™s neck and slammed it into the ground, causing the

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The anti-aging serum worked; all those years of long nights in the lab, away from his beloved, were finally going to pay off. The old scientist came into their bedroom to share the good news, only to find