Tall glasses of bubbling drinks, scarlet strawberries and a golden message. It must be an ‘Elf Road’ hook! Pie Corbett Talk for Writing Susie Hillard

Grade 3 have been working on peer feedback and independent editing skills during our first innovation for the year. Talk for Writing Pie Corbett jane ralphs Susie Hillard Mandy Nayton

Applying our sentence pattern to a new setting. Similes can be tricky but these Y4 students have really thought about the comparison. Pie Corbett jane ralphs Susie Hillard Mandy Nayton

Progression of a Y1 student 5/2 - 5/3 (and a 5 day lock down in between!) Talk for Writing Pie Corbett Susie Hillard

Grade 3 have been looking at a new sentence pattern for our information report. We were able to apply it to a new place and a person! jane ralphs Pie Corbett Talk for Writing

A wonderful example of a spine poem about the fearsome Jabberwock by a Grade 3 student. We love the careful word choices! Talk for Writing jane ralphs Pie Corbett Susie Hillard

Join @DanielleToon, Susannah Schoeffel and Dandenong North’s Jenny Mackay at this ACSA National webinar 💻 on Wednesday, for a small fee. 🎫 📝 Register here: acsa.edu.au/pages/page812.…

Some very busy TfW classes yesterday. The Gingerbread Man, Monkey See, Supertato and Theseus and the Minotaur! Talk for Writing

With a whole term of remote learning our teachers and students are still doing an amazing job to inspire writing. Y4 are finding lots of opportunities for short burst writing in our model text ‘The Creek’

We are so happy to be back into the classroom after completing Talk for Writing Reading training. The Grade 3s are reading the incredible book Wisp and we have recorded our initial responses. Jamie Thomas Pie Corbett

Shortburst writing in Year 1 after online training with Pie Corbett Jamie Thomas so many different ideas from the children, they loved it!

So fantastic to be back at school in Term 2. Some fun hooks in our early years this week. Pie Corbett Talk for Writing jane ralphs Susie Hillard

Lots of fun collecting evidence of dragons and ‘magpie-ing’ some fabulous ideas from ‘Dragons’ Wood’ by Brian Moses. Ideas then used in sentence pattern work, for discussion writing. Pie Corbett Talk for Writing Susie Hillard

Very excited to be hosting this next term Talk for Writing Pie Corbett Susie Hillard dsf.net.au/our-services/p…

A little bit of Shortburst writing in Y2 following our workshop with Susie Hillard

We have worked hard over the last few years to implement evidence-informed, consistent practice at our school and we are very proud of the recent achievements. Thank you jane ralphs Pie Corbett Susie Hillard Mandy Nayton Pamela Snow John Walker, Sounds-Write

Y3 washing lines, displaying the learning. Well done 3A 🤩 Talk for Writing

Next term we will be hosting an open day. You will have the opportunity to see Talk for Writing in action across a range of classes and we will share how we plan a unit of work. We would love to see you there! dsf.net.au/our-services/p…