John Ferry Kenny Farquharson Could do with adding text, specifically the figures you mentioned in the form of pop ups. Visually good, soundtrack good, but also need a call to action faded subtlety into the background for the whole vid. #positivecritique
Most interesting to see #TabbardtheMusical #canyoufeeltheheat #Dungarees & #Galileo Liverpool Everyman & Playhouse theatres scratch performances today and how the pieces will develop. Great for writers, directors and musical directors to hear audience views and reactions. #newwriting #positivecritique
Nikki Haley A little bit of diversity would have made it a perfect team. #Positivecritique