daina 🌙 I've gotten this feedback before. A small example might be, instead of saying "She looked afraid", you would say "her mouth quivered and her palms began to sweat" or something like that.

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Two old dogs keeping me company while I write. #writingcommunity #amwriting

I am reading, Murder off U Street, by Jacque Rosman. I'm swapping reviews with her. I'm reading her book, and she reads mine, then we review each other's. Let me know if anyone out there wants to swap! #WritingCommunity

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It’s not too late for a beach read. Try a Thriller, Suspense, Mystery Book - Cabana Bay (Cabana Bay Mystery Series Book 1) written by Ruben D. Gonzales | Read online free sample chapters allauthor.com/book/98111/?ty…

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My latest book just arrived. This makes seven published and it never gets old. Keep writing out there. #writingcommunity #amwriting #books

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Remember I'll be at this Saturday's Book Marks Festival of Books. I hope it doesn't rain!

Up early to write with trusted friends for company. I guess too early for them. Do you write early or late? #writingcommunity

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AllAuthor Check out the Fourth book in my Black Mountain Mystery Series. Emma's up to her neck in trying to run her business, put out the Black Mountain Post, and solve the murder of her sister-in-law's fiancé. #WritingCommunity